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Join date : 2010-10-18
Location : Secret... *Shifty Eyes*

PostSubject: Maemi Inokuma   18th October 2010, 11:45

Name: Maemi Inokuma.
-Nickname: None.
Gender: Female.
Age: 10.
Birthday: 14th August.

Clan: Of no clan at the moment, however I may later try to set one up by developing an uber cool jutsu ^^.
Village: The rules state if a village, it must be Konoha so that. However I would like to be part of a different village if any oppurtunities open.
Rank: Academy Student
Group/Job: None.

Maemi has palish skin and dark black hair cut to shoulder length. She wears a child sized dark black flak jacket, and a pair of similiarly coloured shorts and boots of that colour to her ankles, her hair is tied at the back with a white ribbon, which is of the same colour as the filler net behind her jacket. She is of average size for her age and has grey eyes.

Along her left cheek, Maemi has 4 cuts which form the shape of the Kirigakure symbol, this was placed on her by a Mist Shinobi whom saved her when she was younger, as a reminder as to whom she owes her life.

I can't really think of anything else to put.

Maemi tries to make combat short and minimise damage to the surrounding area, she prefers to use quick, accurate and powerful strikes. Generaly Maemi is shy and withdrawn, struggling to talk with anyone who has not spent a good deal of time personally gaining her trust.


Signature Jutsu
Maemi seems to be able to use some water jutsus already when she is in a desperate situation, when doing so her 4 cuts glow blue and release chakra themselves, which innatley allows her to use jutsus such as water clone and mist shroud, however after the state passes she is paralysed for a day or two due to the amound of energy required for it to work.

Clan Information
Clan name: Of no Clan.
Kekkei Genkai: No.
Clan symbol: None.
Clan History: Irrelevant.
Link: Unnecessary.

Skill Information
Specialties: Specialises in Nin and Tai Jutsus, has no apparent ability to use Genjutsu.
Elemental Affinity: Water.
Special Characteristics: Due to the special mark she bears, she can access a small amount of extra chakra, 10% that is.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: This jutsu requires minimal chakra and a couple of hand seals, it creates a simple, incorporeal clone of it's creator.

Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: This jutsu uses a small portion of chakra to create a physical clone of the user at 1/10th of the user's power, the clone reverts to it's watery form after taking damage and can only travel a short distance from it's creator.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: E-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: This jutsu requires a minimal chakra amount and simply swaps the user with an object in it's surroundings, allowing the user to quickly avoid attacks.

Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: Envelops the area with a dense fog, reducing the enemies ability to see, drains chakra as you use it.

Name: Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: Changes the user's physical form, allowing them to quickly disguise themselves, uses a little chakra.

[Use this template for all styles]
Type: [Taijutsu, Kenjutsu or Weaponry]
Description: What does the style actually do? Why would someone want to use it?]

Name: Standard Ninja Equipment
Rank: E-Rank
Appearance: All should be known.
Special Abilities: It may lean slightly towards Kirigakure design over Konohagakure.
Origin: Maemi was left with this by the Mist Ninja whom saved her, along with a message, asking her to be strong enough to save herself next time.

No Puppets.


Her childhood involved her hometown being attacked, it was on the coastal areas of the fire country, although it was mostly destroyed, a passing ninja of the hidden mist waded in and managed to save the last person, Maemi, he left her with equipment and a message, and took her to Konohagakure, the nearest hidden village, to be raised as a shinobi, she has been living in an orphanage and preparing for ninja academy, she has now been in it for two years and still needs to do a final year before trying to graduate.

RP Sample
I could, though it may take a little time, do I need one to apply for this rank? Please tell me.

Final Note
Thank you very much for taking the time for reading my application =).
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Konoha Genin

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Join date : 2010-04-19
Age : 21
Location : I dunno.

PostSubject: Re: Maemi Inokuma   19th October 2010, 02:40


You need lot more to the personality and it would be better if you would add more to the appearance.You should have a quote.You need to the history a bit about Maemi in academy.And of course Role Play sample is always needed.
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Kaoru Misora
Konoha Genin

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Join date : 2010-04-19
Location : Next to a canyon, saying bye to my foot...

PostSubject: Re: Maemi Inokuma   30th October 2010, 15:57

(Thanks for posting Luxas. I'll have Rak check this one out. We can still RP with each other!)

It's not necessary to have a quote, and you can delete that section if you're not going to have one.

Good start, but academy students cannot use C-rank jutsu. Sorry Smile
Once she graduates to Genin, she can learn that one.

Put a little more on her personality. Perhaps hint at a reason to why she is so shy.

For an academy student profile it doesn't look bad. Nice start indeed. Keep it up!

If you want an example of a completed profile, you can check out any of the ones in my siggy.
And if you want I can make a Chunin/Jonin to teach her!
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