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PostSubject: Kinzoku Clan (complete)   20th April 2010, 06:34

Clan name: Kinzoku
Kekkei Genkai: Koton Release, a Chuunin or above member of the clan who utilises both the Doton and Raiton Elements will be able to use the Koton or Steel Release by controlling both elements at the same time. Though it is named Steel Release, a skilled user will be able to control other forms of metal including Gold. The element will almost always win against Fuuton jutsu but has a weakness for Katon but the weakness can be exploited by the user and be used to burn the target.
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Clan History: The Kinzoku Clan existed long before the time of the first villages and lived high in the mountains, the clan members settled in the mountains of Kumogakure and formed an alliance with the Shoujin Clan. After a long battle to decide who will lead the organization, the Kinzoku leader Hiro Kinzoku was gravely injured in the battle and the Shoujin's prevailed. After the 1st Raikage decided to kill the leader of the organization, the Kinzoku members decided to become the leaders of the group, the Shoujin struck a deal with the God of War, Hachiman to give them more battle power and a new Kekkei Genkai in return for a part of their humanity, the Kinzoku were defeated in battle but not before Hiro Kinzoku was able to use the epic strength of Magunechikku Toukuisei to kill many of the Shoujin and carve the Valley of Cloud and Lightning, a mere three members were able to flee and are currently in hiding. The Shoujin Clan, were exiled from the main areas of Kumogakure for their misdeed and most have fled to live in Konoha, if given the chance the two clans wouls battle it out to the death.


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PostSubject: Re: Kinzoku Clan (complete)   20th April 2010, 08:25

A fan of advanced elements, are we?

Raito Shoujin wrote:
Name: Powerful Drilling Arm
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Koton
Description: The user will generate a layer of steel around their arm, which will take the form of a drill powered by chakra. The user can drill throught most objects and the Drill can conduct Raiton chakra for added power. The drill will last for one attack.

Name:Steel Spike Forest
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Koton
Description: The user will create hundreds of large spikes made of steel which will portrude from the ground, the spikes will be incredibly sharp and will vary in size and height but most being rather tall. After 3 posts, the jutsu will stop and the spikes will retract back in to the ground.

Powerful Drilling Arm: To my knowledge, Raiton gives electric shocks, not added impact power. However, Doton gives impact power, so just change the element.

Steel Spike Forest: hundreds of spikes is pretty much, either lower the number to about 50-75 or increase the rank and lower it to 100.

That's about it. Good work.
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PostSubject: Re: Kinzoku Clan (complete)   20th April 2010, 10:17

Midnight, the Raiton is not for impact power but much like how Sasuke channels energy through his sword. I'll lower the other but remember hundreds is merely synonymous for a lot. I am working on the Organization, join chat please.
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PostSubject: Re: Kinzoku Clan (complete)   21st April 2010, 02:19

Okay, forget the first thing.
I don't see anything wrong with this anymore. APPROVED

Don't make another clan before making characters in your two existant clans, thank you.
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